Hello, my name is Margaret Cohn. I am the Features Editor of the Beachcomber. Please leave me a note here as a comment to this post if you are writing any stories that I need to know about.
Hello, my name is Margaret Cohn. I am the Features Editor of the Beachcomber. Please leave me a note here as a comment to this post if you are writing any stories that I need to know about.
68 responses so far ↓
inesm2011 // October 23, 2007 at 5:48 pm |
Hi, I’m Ines Michelena, and I’m co-writing an article with Stephanie O’Phelan that would probably fit best into your category. It deals with Mr. Burris and the ensemble’s success. Just letting you know and hoping you can soon write a comment.
stephanieo2011 // October 23, 2007 at 5:49 pm |
Hi, Im Stephanie O’Phelan, and i am co-writing an article with Ines Michelena that would probably fit best into your catagory. It deals with Mr.Burris and the ensemble’s success.
wendyg2011 // October 25, 2007 at 5:05 pm |
hey I’m Wendy Goya and the article for features that I’m doing is security gaurds. Sarah told me to do the student of the week/month thing, but mr.Weiss already told me that someone is doing that so I’ll be doing Security Gaurds.
oscart2007 // October 25, 2007 at 6:25 pm |
Hi, Im writing a artical (by myself mind you) about ap students
wendyg2011 // October 30, 2007 at 2:20 pm |
I’m sorry for the fact that my article was not up. But truth is, I DID post it last night. I published it and logged out and left it for reviews. I honestly don’t know what happened. Maybe it was that I had put it on quickly and didn’t check to see if it was there. I’m SO sorry for this inconvinience. I will have my article published once more on my page today.
Thanks.
wendyg2011 // November 1, 2007 at 4:59 pm |
hey. ok I’ll meet you first thing during lunch. I have chemistry in the 9 hundred building. Just to let you know. RIGHT outside of the office? ok then.
see you then.
manuelam2011 // November 1, 2007 at 6:07 pm |
I can meet you during lunch but is has to be real quick, cause i have to go somewhere else and you too.But i will be there.
wendyg2011 // November 5, 2007 at 6:07 pm |
hey listen for my next features article this week, mr. weiss gave me approval to write about random students and you know a short bio. on them.
How should I go about it? Like, really go up to someone and ask if they wanna be in it, or have like a flyer up in classrooms and let the students come to me whoever wants to do it? and you know the first to meet me that week or so will be it? i don’t know.
what do you think?
joselynm2009 // November 5, 2007 at 6:10 pm |
hey i did an article on gay acceptance a while back and i wanted to know what happened to it.
wendyg2011 // November 7, 2007 at 6:38 pm |
hey ok well you know how i did the security gaurd article? The Random Student article be similar to it. You know the Athlete of the Week or something article that was written by Jocelyne i think, ok well yeah. I’ll just randomly choose a student or however it’ll be handle and basically write about them.
do you kind of get it now???
janessac2009 // November 13, 2007 at 6:53 pm |
Marggie
))))))
umm, on Novembr 16th there is a field trip to the Marriot for MBSH Alumni Hall of Fame… that should DEF be covered. It’s this fridayyyy !
janessac2009 // November 13, 2007 at 6:54 pm |
oops, sry, i forgot.. also Tomorrow morning is the AOHT Stars breakfast.. it’s to recognize all students with a 3.0 GPA or higher.. teachers will be serving students their breakfast, haha.
CUTE short story? let me know what you think.
joselynm2009 // November 14, 2007 at 6:14 pm |
Hey! I was wondering if you had any articles you wanted me to get started on. Im brainstorming a few of my own but if you have any sitting there that u want to get done im here.
joselynm2009 // November 14, 2007 at 7:16 pm |
I just posted some Ideas on my blog. Id really like to get started on the second one; it seems the most promising.
oscart2007 // November 20, 2007 at 7:03 pm |
Hi Im wrighting my final draft over the break so look on my page on sunday and cretiq it please.
wendyg2011 // November 24, 2007 at 12:09 am |
hey I have my article up already.
I was really confused on how to write it correctly and ask Mr. Weiss for help.
If I wrote it right, then I got the hang of it and I already know who I’m going to interview next for the next random student.
Kind of took me long because you had told me to ask recommendations from teachers but mr. weiss told me it wouldn’t be random so i had to go back to what i thought.
Hopefully I did good =]
Thanks
joselynm2009 // November 28, 2007 at 7:12 pm |
Theres a link on my blog to pictures of those students’ art work. Check it out.
joselynm2009 // November 28, 2007 at 7:19 pm |
I was also wondering what happened to that article I did on gay acceptance. The final article is under Oct. 2 on my blog. I’m sorry to keep bothering you about it but I think its something that students at the school could benefit from reading. So check it out and get back to me, I dont care when its done as long as its ready for this semesters paper. If that could happen that’d be great.
Thanks =D
ashlieh2008 // November 29, 2007 at 6:47 pm |
yo!
check out my drug storyyyy & facts =)
gratsi
wendyg2011 // November 30, 2007 at 6:51 pm |
ok i’m on it.
and i have good quotes and stories from AJ’s friends so i’ll have a separate section for the stories about him.
ANNDDD for the pedometer contest story you want me to cover, I’ll talk to ms. tenniswoods (lol i have no idea how to spell that) to tell me the teachers that are competing since she’s the one running this thing (that’s what Mr. Weiss told me but he’s unsure) and i’ll ask the teachers about it and stuff. =]]]
if anything i’ll comment you.
wendyg2011 // December 3, 2007 at 1:34 am |
i have my 1st draft up on the pedometer contest but it’s not complete since i don’t have enough info.
but yeah, take a look at it =)
wendyg2011 // December 3, 2007 at 9:50 pm |
hey i’m almost done with the stories from AJ but when i write his story, do i make it into a long quote by him or write from what i heard of the story but 1st person oo 3rd person???
and the stories from his friends? the same way or what?
help!
wendyg2011 // December 3, 2007 at 11:22 pm |
ok I am so confused on what you told me. lol
because you had told me to make the interesting stories a separate section and if I remember correctly, separate stories as well. but yeah. Explain what you told a bit more please =/
Mr. weiss also answered my question. Please read it
wendyg2011 // December 5, 2007 at 3:11 am |
done with the pedometer contest article!
it can now be edited since it has substance.
(hopefully)
=]
joselynm2009 // December 6, 2007 at 7:23 pm |
Hey I posted it on my page and left a message for Alicia to look at it. Tell me if theres anything else you want me to do.
alexco09 // December 7, 2007 at 12:56 am |
I assigned Wendy the Best Buddies article I told you about. Her final draft is due De. 12, 13 at the absolute latest.
wendyg2011 // December 10, 2007 at 5:58 pm |
margaret i’m so sorry! the drafts of the contest and profile completely slipped my mind! i feel so bad! i hope you’re not mad i’m really sorry…
wendyg2011 // December 10, 2007 at 7:03 pm |
hey umm about the pedometer contest, i read the feedbacks and stuff but are the quotes alright? Or should i get more quotes from other teachers?
or are those questions answered and didn’t see them correctly?
i feel like i’m asking so many questions Xp
joselynm2009 // December 16, 2007 at 2:35 am |
I just posted another Art students draft on my blog. I put in quotes and changed the structure with the help of weiss and class suggestions. So check it out n tell me whatcha think. =D
oscart2007 // December 18, 2007 at 1:04 am |
Hi im sorry that this is so late. But I is well worth the wait. I was able to get a really juicy interview outta him. Im having it peer edited to school today. I would like you to edit as well. Many Thanks! Oscar
hitides // December 23, 2007 at 2:31 am |
Thanks Margaret! I will edit and post to the website over break – enjoy your time off!
Should I be looking out for anything else?
joselynm2009 // January 9, 2008 at 2:36 am |
Hey
Ive started interviewing Mrs.Meyerchord(Zananiri) about how stressfull it is to be pregnant and going through the move. Wiess said it was a good idea so im doing that as well. About the teachers’ breaks i havent found anything interesting yet but ill keep trying. I was hoping I could turn in the first draft on the Meyerchord article instead, its more likely ill have that done by thurs.
wendyg2011 // January 15, 2008 at 3:23 am |
hey, i sent you an email telling you that the Best Buddies article is up on my page.
check it outttt
wendyg2011 // January 24, 2008 at 10:46 pm |
i’m still in the features section.
i’m having a hard time coming up with something to write about.
please help.
nataliea2011 // January 30, 2008 at 10:59 pm |
hello!
whats up? so i’m starting my article now..sorry i havent started sooner but i had this HUGE science project!my bad..can you check my page around 8 o’clock it will be done by then..sorry for the Inconvenience
-nattyB
vanessav2o11 // January 30, 2008 at 11:50 pm |
Hii
okay , I dont have a first draft yet
( sooorrrryyy ! ) but ! I FINALLY have something to write about =) and I should be caught up with everything by next week fridayy . So like first draft will be up next week wendsday-ish .
juliac2008 // February 4, 2008 at 7:11 pm |
hey Margaret!
Could you please leave a list of storys that you believe will be published, so I can begin taking photographs?
Thanks
arielaz2009 // February 5, 2008 at 12:01 am |
First draft posted
arielaz2009 // February 5, 2008 at 3:57 pm |
Notes and Quotes posted on blog, second draft with quotes will be posted by tonight.
christellef2009 // February 6, 2008 at 7:28 pm |
i posted an article on my blog entitlted culture blueprint fair. plzz edit
nataliea2011 // February 6, 2008 at 11:59 pm |
mr weiss said i should just continue my article so i guess i will i’ll post it tonight
thanks,natalie
wendyg2011 // February 11, 2008 at 6:13 pm |
for the ASPIRA article, i did try to find out what the club was about, but one of the members are in my class and she couldn’t really explain it to me. So i went to the president for her to explain but she couldn’t really put it into words. SOOO i went to the advisor, Yeney Rodriguez and she basically told me everything that i had already put in my article. The ASPIRA club doesn’t really have one specific purpose. I don’t know.
Now, the article ideas; “venture away from club” ok i can do that, but then i don’t know what i’m interested in when it comes to features. All i know about features is that it’s about clubs and profiles on people. But i feel the people in features are all doing profiles so i don’t want to do that.
I asked Weiss for help, but it didn’t help me at all. =/
wendyg2011 // February 11, 2008 at 9:34 pm |
ok i know what i’m going to write, i will survey students on who they think is the Funniest teacher and do a profile on the most voted one.
wendyg2011 // February 16, 2008 at 3:55 pm |
yes i have been surveying students in a lot of different classes and mostly in upper grade levels. (juniors and seniors since they have more experiences with teachers from past years)
but mr. weiss told me to get freshmen perspectives so i did as well. i was only going to survey 100 students but now mr. weiss told me i should do like 400. so what ima do is give out a bunch of papers to some of the people in my journalism class to give out in their classes and in their other electives.
that’s it for now. =)
carlosm2010 // February 16, 2008 at 10:03 pm |
hey thanks for the support ill see what i can do
nataliea2011 // February 17, 2008 at 12:16 am |
hi,
Alot of people have been telling me that the chess team is amazing but isnt popularized…..is that true? because i saw the trophy in the office. does that count as public attention?? Oh and i’ll get to work on the planner..it was a last minuate one, i wasnt paying attention to my deadline…my bad!!!! sorry!!!!!!!!
carlosm2010 // February 26, 2008 at 6:16 pm |
okidoki um…check out my quotes cause i have 3 pages of em and i dont know how to put it together
arielaz2009 // February 28, 2008 at 3:05 am |
check my blog, my first draft is posted but it isn’t a features piece.
Its all explained on my blog.
wendyg2011 // February 28, 2008 at 2:45 pm |
I know I’m so behind.
I still have to survey people and stuff. I need to print out more surveys and give them out.
I talked to Mr. Weiss about my situation so he knows. I’ll be working on it today.
nataliea2011 // March 5, 2008 at 6:26 pm |
heyyy
sorry i’m so dryed of article ideas….i know they all sucked..yeah beat me with a virtual stick if you will
i feel really stupid
thanks
wendyg2011 // March 5, 2008 at 7:17 pm |
Ok so you already know i’m profiling Mr. Spiegelman (voted funiest teacher by students)And my next features article I’ll also be working on will be about The AOHT Senior Class Auction Result and the money won (and the fact that they’re planning on going to London with the money)
I will interview Ms. Alvarez, the students in the club and those that supported by bidding
wendyg2011 // March 10, 2008 at 1:17 am |
hey, i’m glad i’m not only doing profiles and spotlighting clubs, too
i have been wanting to do articles like this one i am writing and the one that you once gave me, the teacher’s pedometer contest.
i just never knew what was going on that needed to be written about
wendyg2011 // March 10, 2008 at 1:21 am |
i forgot, i am working on the spiegelman article…
btw, at first i didn’t know who was in charge of the AOHT and people (including Mr. Weiss) said Alvarez but it turned out to be Ms. Diaz so i already know who i will be talking to. no problems there =)
carlosm2010 // March 10, 2008 at 11:37 pm |
hey man if u have better ideas i’ll gladly take em…people just seem to run out in away
wendyg2011 // March 23, 2008 at 6:29 pm |
hey, Mr. Weiss checked my article for the Spiegelman article but check it again if you’d like.
I also posted the article about the Academy of Hospitality & Tourism auction
it’s the first draft…I’ll fix it up in class monday for any corrections you make
sorry about all the delay
miriamk2009 // March 24, 2008 at 8:10 pm |
Hey Margaret,
For your centerspread piece I’m going to need you to get a quote from a science teacher about the classrooms.
Thanks :]
blancaj2011j // April 9, 2008 at 5:42 pm |
Hi Margaret…
My phone number is 305-864-5001. My email is poppychick.nerd.geek@hotmail.com. You’ll usually find me on hotmail im. Feel free to instant message or email me at any time.
By the way, Thanks! I like this article idea of spring break because I know Mrs. Russell went to Ireland and almost kept crashing because the road and vehicles aren’t like here in the U.S. ^.^
Ummm…
-Blanca
amaliar2011 // April 21, 2008 at 4:58 pm |
Hey Margaret, I’m running into some trouble. The list isn’t up and I can’t get to the treasurer. I’ll try to e-mail her tonight and will hopefully get everything up by friday.
amaliar2011 // April 23, 2008 at 5:44 pm |
hey margaret, I really need help. I got Mr.Weiss to give me an extension for tuesday. I plan on doing the student interviews on friday if
I can get the treasurer to either post the list of let me see it. I doubt that I can get too far, but I will still try. Truthfully, I think this is a dead end
wendyg2011 // April 27, 2008 at 1:50 am |
hey, mr. weiss gave me an extension on my article
just wanted to let you know
btw…the format of the article- is it good if i start of explaining what an internship is, then go into how to get one (what to do, where to go online and steps), and finally quotes from students that have internships and quotes from ms. alvarez and dr. murray?
thanks
mariap2011 // May 7, 2008 at 6:26 pm |
Het Margaret, my planner for the next article is already up on my blog so please edit it and give me advice! thanks!!
wendyg2011 // May 12, 2008 at 2:31 pm |
hey, i am so sorry that i’m late on all my articles
wanna let you know i’m gettting them done and posted as quickly as i possibly can.
again, really sorry!
wendyg2011 // May 15, 2008 at 5:14 pm |
i have the internship article up on my blog.
alexanderr2008 // May 20, 2008 at 5:40 pm |
hey i have the con-side of the pro-con uniforms article posted on my page and i need it edited at some point. thanks.
alexanderr2008 // May 22, 2008 at 10:34 pm |
o my bad i thought weiss said to submit it to you but w/e thanks for passing the word on.
alexanderr2008 // May 30, 2008 at 2:47 am |
ok maybe this one is actually for you i have a first draft done on senior obligations
miriamk2009 // October 17, 2008 at 6:11 am |
Hi Margaret, I edited your first draft of the unigo article so if you’ve worked on the second draft go ahead and merge them. It’s right here: eicweissjournalism.wordpress.com
kevins2011 // October 17, 2008 at 5:02 pm |
hey Margaret, thanks for the help. Mr. Weiss wanted me to let you know that he told me to do the article on tobacco use and he wants me to stick with that one.
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